My hot air balloon

This week we have used a picture as motivation for our writing. We had a story starter and then we had to carry on the story. What I like about my writing is adjectives. I need to improve on spelling. We also made a google draw showing the things that we would take with us in our hot air balloon.

I have packed tomatoes, carrots and Mandarins.  I am happy to
go on the red hot air balloon. I am going with mum and dad.
 My mum and dad can afford to see the world, so can I.
Mum and Dad can hear the swishing wind going around the
red hot air balloon.  I am going around the beautiful world. All
the people looked like little animals on the ground far below.
I love going in the sky, it was beautiful in the red hot air balloon.

  By Mikayla